Music Video Pitch/ Reflection

Pitch Reflection

1.Are there any areas of your presentation you would like to give any more detail on?

        One area I would give more detail on if I had the chance would be my star persona and brand identity. This is because I fell as if I did not let my audience fully understand how I wanted my artist to be represented throughout the music video. Also I would of given more detail on my schedule slide. This is because I didn't let my audience fully know what I was going to do on each day and of filming and, what locations I would of went to on each day. This made it harder for them to understand how it was possible I would of had a finished music video by the deadline.

2. What did your audience identify as the strengths or your music video idea?  

        A strength my audience said about my music video idea was the fact that I was going to use a girl to go into the army instead of a boy, which subverted the conventions. Also the audience like the fact that, I was not just going to do a typical love music video, and that it was going to be based on love but non of the cast being mad at each other, but just wanting to do the best for each other, which you don't normally see.

3. What did the audience identify as a improvement? 

         My audience identified a few  improvement I could of done. One of them was the fact that how I was going to show the girl was in the army. Before the feedback I was just going to show her in a army costume, but my audience said I could also show her leaving her boyfriend, by getting on a train with a back-pack in a full costume, to connote that she has actually gone to the army and left him. Also another improvement in term of practicality my audience said was that fact that I was going to film everyday apart from Saturday. They started that it was going to be to much for me and the cast, and that I should have some day of from filing, so that I don't get tired and bored. 

4. What changed would you have to your music video concept based on the feedback?

           Based on the feedback I would change the creativity of my music video by choosing more unique locations instead of a park and bedroom, to make my music video less boring. In term of practicality I would, have to think of a different location instead of the London eye due to the fact that it will cost to much money to for a film inside it. In term of technicality I would change the amount of day I film per week, I would give me and my cast more time of, so we don't get bored and tired of filming.